If the world ended tomorrow,
how would I feel?
Would I be sad to see the end?
Or think it no big deal?
If the world ended tomorrow,
would I cry?
That with all my things in the world,
me and my memories must die?
I think it would be a catastrophe,
of the greatest kind.
I'd be miserable and lost
and maybe out of my mind
There'd be so much I had to say,
so much I kept back,
That I thought I had the time for,
but it was time that I lack.
There'd be memories and stories
That'd die with me
A lot of love and hurt,
a lot of you and me.
There'd be more than hurt,
a lot of affection and love
Which I share with beings
but I rarely ever show
For it's those you love,
that you take for granted
but its them you always need
but they hardly feel wanted
I'd want to yell it out
From the top of the world
That I've led a great life,
and have liked and been loved.
That I've been lucky
to share these times
With you and your smiles
and your laughter like chimes
That there's never anything called later
and there's just now and today
When you have to let it all out
And yes, you do have to say
That people aren't forever
And neither are we
And we should love more easily
Be open and be free
That's what I'd do,
were my world to end
I'd speak my heart out
Instead of struggling to fend
Because my world is quite small
it is contained in thee
And if this world were ending
With it would be me.
how would I feel?
Would I be sad to see the end?
Or think it no big deal?
If the world ended tomorrow,
would I cry?
That with all my things in the world,
me and my memories must die?
I think it would be a catastrophe,
of the greatest kind.
I'd be miserable and lost
and maybe out of my mind
There'd be so much I had to say,
so much I kept back,
That I thought I had the time for,
but it was time that I lack.
There'd be memories and stories
That'd die with me
A lot of love and hurt,
a lot of you and me.
There'd be more than hurt,
a lot of affection and love
Which I share with beings
but I rarely ever show
For it's those you love,
that you take for granted
but its them you always need
but they hardly feel wanted
I'd want to yell it out
From the top of the world
That I've led a great life,
and have liked and been loved.
That I've been lucky
to share these times
With you and your smiles
and your laughter like chimes
That there's never anything called later
and there's just now and today
When you have to let it all out
And yes, you do have to say
That people aren't forever
And neither are we
And we should love more easily
Be open and be free
That's what I'd do,
were my world to end
I'd speak my heart out
Instead of struggling to fend
Because my world is quite small
it is contained in thee
And if this world were ending
With it would be me.
\(~_^)/ nice
ReplyDeleteThanks! ^_^
DeleteN if dis world is ending, wid it wud be me <3
ReplyDeleteYeah even I had built the poem around that paragraph only :)
DeleteReally really awesome...
ReplyDeleteSome great lines spoken by thee,
You might feel how puny are we;
Your words were pretty and meaning was deep,
May these wishes forever you keep...
Some stanza were just amazing,
Read them twice, and kept on dazing,
I could have written more, but felt so lazy,
Had to rhyme, so I'm ending with crazy..
Surprised as I am at the words u spoke
DeleteCoz I knew u were smart, but not that u wrote
I feel flattered and happy at the efforts u took
Coz I thought this post wouldn't get more than a look
A blog I think even you should write
And u can shed some great light
On the topics that go on in that mind
And who knows, a new talent we may find :)
I am humbled by your appreciating words,
Deletethe power you possess, is mightier than herds,
Think not your work will ever be overlooked.
Your recipe of words can't be better cooked.
Oh dear I don't possess a poetic hand,
Whatever i write shall ever be bland,
But your optimism is shining bright,
For likes of me merely follow the light.
Humble and modest, as you are
DeleteYour writing's great, it'll go quite far
The power that you say I possess
Read your own hand, you have no less
As for me, I write only that
Which I think and feel with my heart
Hope you keep reading my works like now
Because praise is always welcome you know ;)